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The tail is excellent, I can't tell if you've used a clipping mask or a pattern for the stars, but it's great. The shading, blurring and hard finale edge gives the whole thing the right ethereal style similar to nightmare moon and ursa major. You probably should increase the "Mitre Limit" in the stroke properties for the tail itself, to prevent the flat edges and end each point in a sharp end.
The bandaged leg is great, lots of objects and some nice shading. The top part seems to have a bigger stroke than the lower half, I don't know if this was intentional.
With the purple body; you probably want more shading on the back leg, especially at the bottom where you have the contrast. Apart fromt hat, excellent work. You've got a an outside shape and an inside shape if I'm not mistaken. This allowed you to do variable stroke widths. There is a strait line at the top of the left/front leg which should probably have been a curve.
The horn has a shadow on it which probably needs to be lighter, considering there is no other shadow on the face. The muzzle is also hard to see, perhaps a small hint of protrusion given the slightly angle of the face. At the moment she's got a Voldermort look and needs more nose.
The eyes are fantastic, no comment, no improvements. Great use of flare circles and gradients. The way you've got the ear and hair to mix is great, I presume either the hair or the ear are separate objects. but I can't spot where they join, so great work!
The lighting on the back/left leg is actually really good, extending that to the whole figure would have improved the depth (but probably beyond what the MLP:FiM style calls for).
Overall, I love the piece. Thanks for mentioning Inkscape
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